welcome to dawn world
where rainbows glitter
and shadows threaten to eat you alive...
this is the writing diary of d.m. bonanno, writer of fantasy, science fiction, and the occassional something else.
Monday, July 14, 2008
The Sunguard edit has met with some success. The story nearly doubled in size, and maybe 100 words remains of the original story. The changes are definitely for the better. The ending took an odd turn, but I think it works. I've got it out to some readers now, so hopefully soon I'll know if I've gone off the deep end or not. Happy reading, my friends. :)