welcome to dawn world
where rainbows glitter
and shadows threaten to eat you alive...
this is the writing diary of d.m. bonanno, writer of fantasy, science fiction, and the occassional something else.
Sunday, January 10, 2010
Violas... new opening, definitely going with 1st person pov. Not sure of the ending yet, but reshaping the story. Mostly, I'm rewriting it, not just revising. None of the writing/language really thrilled me in the first draft, so I really just went through the original manuscript and chose which lines I really like and want to keep if I can. The rest, is just an outline.