violas in progress

Spent a few hours on Black Violas today, and put together a game plan on how to fix it. I was afraid it wasn't fixable.  I didn't understand why the voice wanted to be in first person, but it did, desperately, and today I figured out why.  I figured out why the ending didn't work, and came up with a better one. I found a couple of muse bombs and I am exploiting the hell out of 'em. This is going to be a kick ass story when I'm through with it. I would love to share specifics, but heck, that'll ruin it for when you read it.