welcome to dawn world
where rainbows glitter
and shadows threaten to eat you alive...
this is the writing diary of d.m. bonanno, writer of fantasy, science fiction, and the occassional something else.
Tuesday, March 30, 2010
orchard tonight... all night
Hopefully not all night, but I haven't been able to get this opening quite right. I think I'm almost there. I was on page 4 of a 15 page revision, but I really didn't like the opening. This one is better. I just need it to take me to page 15 and beyond. This story is due tomorrow... back to the revisions.