welcome to dawn world
where rainbows glitter
and shadows threaten to eat you alive...
this is the writing diary of d.m. bonanno, writer of fantasy, science fiction, and the occassional something else.
Saturday, August 9, 2008
The Sunguard edit is complete and off to critters. The story doubled in size and some plot layers were added. I have a feeling the resolution isn't what it should be, so I need to give it one more pass for sure. But my time has paid off, I think it's a good story. It just needs a little more editing love. ;)