I am so glad I decided to edit this story. Revisions are in full swing and I am loving it. I'm still not sure what the title is, but it'll come to me before this edit is complete. I thought for a long time that this story was about racism, but the characterized racism stems from a terrible event that ocurred because one man did not act honorably, and someone had to stop him by any means, and did. That's not honor either, but for a people who respect honor to this degree... well, that's pretty drastic.
New scenes are going in tonight, and then a full edit/cleanup pass.